Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors, this week 8 from my new release Joy Ride, part of the Spice Rack series. It's hot, it's saucy and it's definitely naughty! Kim and Nate are on their way home after dropping the kids at their grandparents, their 'task', according to the jar they opened from the Spice Rack was to express their love on the move, and on the way home, in the car, while Nate is driving, Kim has the perfect idea...well sort of!
She took him deeper still and was rewarded with a wonderful moan of bliss that drowned out the sounds around her.
Almost, because one sound was becoming louder and louder. The wail unmistakable.
Kimberly opened her eyes and saw a blue flash wash over Nate’s black sweater.
Damn.
Quickly she let him fall from her mouth into her waiting palm.
“Shit.” Nate said, “Shit, shit, shit.” He shoved at her. “Sit up, goddamn it. Oh fuck.”
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Whoops! Here comes trouble! Exciting and fun snippet, very realistic!
ReplyDeleteTrouble indeed Gemma - this was so much fun to write, I couldn't help but cringe for my amorous couple :-)
DeleteYikes! I have sadly been in a similar situation. It makes for such a great story now, though! Great eight.
ReplyDeleteI like his reaction! Awesome!
ReplyDeleteHa!! Trying to add spice and...oh dear. Hilarious. I definitely want to see more of this one!
ReplyDeleteHilarious! I love it. and I love his response. Great snippet!
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