Thanks for stopping by Saturday Spankings. As requested this weeks 8 lines are a follow on from last weeks' spanking taken from The Virgin, book #1 in The Sexy as Hell Trilogy.
The voice has switched here, it's a new chapter, and now we're seeing the situation from gorgeous Victor's point of view, though to be fair, he's on the edge, his limit has been reached... the tension is high!
A red fog descended, redder than my poor sodding arse. Zara had known full well she was making me imagine I was fucking a man, getting off on a bloke’s freaky false tits, and she’d bloody well strung me along for the ride.
And that paddle, on my backside, that was supposed to feel good?
Sure, my cock was as hard as wood, my guts ached for release, but still...
And the damn gleeful look on her face.
My heart thumped, and my focus went, my peripheral vision blurring. All I could see was her. All I could think of was proving that it was her who turned me on. Not a beating and a bloke. I’d done it all for her, to play her stupid game.
The air whooshed from Zara’s lungs as I backed her into the wall and a smidgen of the cockiness left her expression. For a moment I wondered if I saw fear.
I didn’t care.
Find out more about Zara and Victor and their vibrant, volatile super-sexy boundary pushing story on the Harlem Dae website.
Wicked, Lily. Deliciously wicked. I love the confusion and tension that builds in this short space. A lovely snippet
ReplyDeleteWow! Very sexy!
ReplyDeleteI like how he turned the tables on her.
nicely done :)
Why is everyone stopping today just as I'm really getting into their writing? Love it when you see that first sign of cockiness leave...
ReplyDeleteShe's really getting him riled up!
ReplyDeleteYum hot!
ReplyDeleteI love when he backed her into the wall.
ReplyDeleteVery hot! Good work.
ReplyDeleteUh oh! Time for Zara to get hers! Love it can't wait for more. Wait, this is already out isn't it? I don't have to wait. Off I go....
ReplyDeleteI do believe Victor has had enough. Hot!
ReplyDeleteThat was very hot Lily!
ReplyDeletePretty much the hottest thing ever. I am very intrigued about this book!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much to you all for these wonderful comments :-)
ReplyDeleteOh Zara, and this is where you learn why it is such a bad idea to poke a sleeping bear! Lovely snippet, Lily!
ReplyDeleteSo damn visceral, Lily. I love it!
ReplyDeleteOh man, backed into a wall! Just at the best part!
ReplyDeleteVery hot snippet!
ReplyDeleteAll I can say is good for him! I think a gent turning tables on a lady is very sexy, especially when it's for him to take command.
ReplyDeleteI agree Kathryn, wild passion-infused lust taking away all sense of sensibility is great fodder for a scene.
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